We reached the gates before sundown. As soon as the guards
caught sight of Daisy, they saluted and lowered their head but after Daisy and
Rascielle passed, they did a complete attitude change and barred our way with
their spears or sticks as I see it.
“It’s alright. They’re with me,” Daisy said.
“Yes, sir!” they exclaimed loudly at the same time and then
replaced the spears to their side, granting us entrance.
“Follow me closely, Chryisle, Noirxus. As you said, the city
is a bit…rowdy,” Daisy said looking for a euphemism for the term ‘dangerously
chaotic’. But seriously, if we could defeat a pack of wolves, a few city
troublemakers shouldn’t be such a big deal.
But as soon as we entered, we were greeted by a boisterous
crowd. Even though it’s almost sundown, people are acting like it is still
noon. Vendors were stationed immediately after the gates as if greeting the
newcomers with goods, which is a pretty good business tactic. A major city like
this one is bound to have a lot of visitors from all over the continent so it’s
only natural to post somewhere near the foreigner’s first glance.
I slowed a bit to look at some merchants what they’re
selling but my eyes couldn’t focus on the goods. I rubbed my eyes but the
blurry image wouldn’t go away.
“What’s the matter Chryisle?” Noirxus asked as his horse
flanked mine.
I felt awful. My head was pulsing in pain as if someone was hitting
my head rhythmically like hammering a nail. “Nothing,” I finally managed to say
as I let one hand release the horse’s reins and massage my temples. “Go on
ahead.”
We traversed the whole town and ended up right in front of
the castle barbican. I would’ve properly admired the whole thing if I didn’t
feel so bad. But at least I could make out the gigantic stone castle beyond us.
It was a very big and beautiful fortress and even more beautiful in the inside
or so I heard. Frankly, as beautiful as it seems, it’s a waste of tax payer’s
money. But these renovations were made ages ago, during the rule of a tyrant I don’t
know about not the current king. If the current king was a tyrant, then the
town would be dirt poor and no business would flourish. But with all the
merchants that greeted us at the door, it’s safe to assume that the king is
doing a good job.
After the barbican was a wooden draw bridge that crossed us
over the large spike-filled ditch that surrounded the whole building. Which is
better than a water filled moat since a lot of people can simply swim across
it. After we crossed the castle walls, we were greeted by a brick road leading
to two large doors flanked with two lion statues.
The doors slowly opened and a fancily dressed, handsome
young man rushed out. He laughed as he ran towards us. Rascielle and Daisy
quickly dismounted and knelt down. I looked at Noirxus and we followed suit.
I dismounted my horse unsteadily. Kahel gave a worried whine
but I simply smiled, reassuring him that it’s nothing. But in truth it wasn’t ‘nothing’.
My head began pounding again, this time harder than before. And I knew Kahel,
being a magical wolf, is sensitive enough to see through me. I just hope I
could last the whole day.
When the man finally reached us, he quickly yanked Rascielle
up and gave her a tight hug. Rascielle was surprised at first but she gently
returned the hug. They eventually broke their embrace and instead stared deeply
into each other’s eyes. Their actions speak louder than any words – they’re in
love. Aw how sweet. Ants could practically
crawl all over them. I cleared my throat aloud, breaking the sickly sweet
atmosphere. Rascielle and her lover both jerked at the same time and looked at me.
“Oh I forgot,” Rascielle’s lover said. “Thank you for
escorting my beloved safely.”
“No need to thank us your highness,” said Daisy before I
could even say a word. “I will promptly reward our escorts.”
“Please do, Captain,” he replied then looking at me he said,
“Know that I am in your debt.”
“No prob—
,” I was cut off. The world suddenly became unsteady and danced before my eyes.
I felt my legs weakening and before I knew it, I felt someone catching me. I
don’t know who it was but when I looked up, I saw someone’s eyes. But I wasn’t
sure because my vision became blurry again. I could hear voices though asking
if I were alright but they were becoming fainter and fainter. Finally
everything became black.
thanks for the update. XD
ReplyDeletenuuuu cliffy D: too short makes me want more XDDDDDDDD thankies 4 the update <3
ReplyDeleteit kinna made me worried. She seems to be alright up until she entered the gate. What could have been the problem? Hmm.
ReplyDeleteAlso, she's been to the city before, so what's changed between then and now? Or are these episodes chronic?
ReplyDeletewhy arent you updating for a long time already? Writers blobk strucked again?
ReplyDeleteHaving read all so far I must say...I'll be back! In a bit. The story is a bit predictable, the writing a bit unpolished and the characters a bit clichéd - I don't expect professional writer quality though and it's still very enjoyable and you have some terrific turns of phrase (my current favourite being "My existence is such a bright star. I’m going to blind people at this rate")
ReplyDeleteBe confident in yourself and keep trying your best, I look forward to reading what comes next ^_^